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Reaching out to child victims of crime.
With a new $4.48 million grant aisd will build on campus mental health support centers for children who have been victimized by crime, on 22 elementary schools. It is imperative that help be provided to children like this, because it may hurt their young, developing brains. This grant will apply to elementary schools in East Austin, as the there is a higher crime rate, and the area faces other challenges aswell. It is also on teachers to report any instances of known reports of victimization, or else they're not properly doing their job.
Who? The people who attend and work in A.I.S.D as well as children.
What?A grant to build  mental health centers for children on elementary school campuses.
Where? In A.I.S.D, on school campuses/
When? The affects of the grant should start soon.
Why? To help victimized children.
Multiple teachers that specialize in health.
In my opinion the very first quote was the strongest, or at least it felt like it was suppose to be the strongest quote.
The lead sentence did not want me to keep on reading. 

Biker races across state for competitions.
The Bowie mountain bike team puts in a lot of time. effort, and hard work. The team practices six days out of the week, and for around 1-1.5 hours a day working as hard as they possibly can. An upperclassmen Austin Buttlar helps look out for some of the incoming team members, trying to forge strong bonds in the team. The teams values are of much importance to them, which help off, and on the bike.
Who?Austin Buttlar, the Bowie mountain biking team.
What? How the Bowie mountain bike team prepares, and operates.
Where? In Austin.
When? Now, and in the future
Why? To make the Bowie mountain bike team, as best as it can be.
How? By practicing and training as hard as they can.
Who was quoted? Austin Buttlar
The strongest quote to me was at the very end, and it was."Elevate others - we lift up our teammates through positivity confidence and graciousness." The lead sentence did make me want to keep reading the story.
Powerful movement takes over pop culture. 
The #MeToo movement absolutely blown up recently, even though the concept is old, it seems as if big change is knocking on powerful figures doors everywhere as of recent. The movement has gained some serious traction last year, with the discoveries of the horrendous acts carried out by Harvey Weinstein last year. Since then, it has changed culture taking down people once thought to be untouchable, all because of this shift that is occurring right here and now, and I think the #MeToo moment may just be the beginning of the big changes to come in the future.
Who? Women, #MeToo movement.
What? The #MeToo movement.
Where? Here, as well as all around the world.
When? Now, and the future to come soon.
Why? To stop sexual-harrasment, and other unfair treatment.
How? By making the movement stay in the spotlight long enough to actually make a real difference.
No one was quoted in this story.
Photography page 7

Coming to life
The photo, to me at least seems a bit random, and maybe not to prevalent, it just seems like it is lacking importance.
I see the rules of balance, as well as the rule of simplicity.
Senior Blake Pousson is the main subject.
The photo is exposed properly.
Butler Down
I like the lighting a lot in this picture, because it really captures your eye. I also think that this is a rather important picture to the story.
I see the rules of Balance, rule of thirds, lines. 
Jack Maedgen is the main subject of the photo.
Yes the photo is exposed properly 

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