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Alyssa Schukar
The life of people, and what the're doing
1. They have seen the stories done better many times before.
2. The photos seem to be of a "certain distance".
3. Some of the pictures did not evoke emotions.
C. 1.The judges liked certain pictures, better than others/

Sam Adams.
B
1.Most of the pictures had no meaning.
2. They had bad angles in multiple photos.
3. Nothing was happening in some of the photos, which would have made the pictures better.
C.Some of the photos.

Justin Mott
B.
1.Some of the photos were out of focus.
2.Heads were cut off in some photos.
3.

C.
1.Was ambitious, and tried difficult things.
2. Had good composition in photos

Anthony Souffle
B.
1.Some of the pictures were not meaningful
2.Could have displayed things in pictures better.
3.

C.
1.Had some good sports photos.
2.

Dustin Snipes
1.The judges noted that Dustin was very creative, and his pictures were all full of action.
2 In the pictures Dustin is able to capture emotion very well, and you feel like his pictures tell a story

3.
A. To pick the winning photograph the judges narrowed it down to the very best ones, then each voted on which photo they thought deserved 1st, 2nd, 3rd, and 4th.

Comments

Prompt Shoot #1

Bowie- I think I followed the rules of Rule of thirds, because the subject is not in the middle of the picture, I also think that this photo follows balance, because of the color red, with the color bashe in the background. Square I think I followed the rules of framing, but i think that I did not avoid mergers very well. But I think I followed lines, because the pattern formed with all the lines Metal- I think this photo follows, Rule of thirds, because the grate is off center, and I also think that this follows lines. Happy- I think this photo follows balance, the pink of the flowers, seems to contrast fairly well with the light blue sky in the background. I also think that this photo follows simplicity, because it is just the flowers, and the sky in the background.

Lines

I think this photo displays lines because of the lines in the building it really catches your eye, but the gash in the building's side really draws your attention, that it was something all parell but now it something broken, and out of form.

American soldier

I think the most powerful image is the one with the caption, life changing decision , at age 17. I think this is the most powerful image, because you can see in his face, that after this, you really can't come back. The images work together in creating a story, because it lets you see What Ian fisher is went through during his journey of enlisting into the army, and fighting in Iraq. Ian Fisher enlisted in the army, right after high school, over and over again he struggled with the discipline in the army, almost getting booted out multiple times. He went through many different relationships over the course of this period of time, and the friends and people he knew before the army grew further apart. After finally going to Iraq, Fisher seemed to be a good soldier, and for the most part followed all commands given. After returning from Iraq, Fisher and his girlfriend Devin, got married. In the photos which feature Ian as the main subject, they are mostly written in present te...

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